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9/26/2013 5:52:39 AM
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Writing a short story.
I haven't been writing a while and I decided to pick up my nook and give it another go. Here's what I have as an intro, 1st draft. Nothing in there is edited so there's going to be a lot of errors. But errors aside; I wanted to know what you guys thought about my 1st draft so far? With enough feed back, I might keep writing the story.
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Let me bump this. I kind of want some feedback from the morning group.
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3 RepliesGood premise, but it needs fleshing out. There's no resolution. Keep at it, it has potential. I would very much like to see the finished product
