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[Story] Entrenched -- (Ch. 2: "The House That Funk Built")

The wait is over. The sequel to [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=46612176&postRepeater1-p=1][i]Dig In: The Jericho VII Conflict[/i][/url], two years in the making, is here. If you have not read [i]Dig In[/i] yet, I suggest doing so before reading [i]Entrenched[/i]. In any case, I have made this story accesible to new readers. [i]Entrenched[/i] is the story of a few Marines trying to survive a war, battle by battle. It's a gritty, human, and mature story. This will be my last fan fiction story and I hope to go out with a bang, so be prepared for lots of action. [quote][i]Dear Reader[/i], I began writing fan fiction stories back on the Halo 2 forum in the first days of Halo fan fiction six years ago. After a long hiatus, I started writing [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=46612176&postRepeater1-p=1][i]Dig In: The Jericho VII Conflict[/i][/url] four years ago. I finished the first four chapters and entered a contest in which I came second place on a now defunct Halo website. With Halo 2 having passed and Halo 3 far on the horizon, I stopped. Two years ago I revisited [i]Dig In[/i] and finished it by adding another six chapters. I released the story on the forum and in private groups to praise and positive response. Now, having just released the [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=46612176&postRepeater1-p=1]final edition of [i]Dig In[/i][/url], I present to you the long-awaited and often delayed sequel. This will be my last work. I would like to thank all of my readers over the past six years. Thank you for reading my stories and for always bringing your enthusiasm. I will always remember my readers, whether it be your [url=http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=32743215] maps[/url], machinima projects, or comments. Thank you and I hope you have enjoyed following the characters I have made for you. I owe a lot to [url=http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page]Halopedia[/url] and [url=http://halo.bungie.org/]Halo.Bungie.Org[/url] for their great resources. That being said, I still couldn't have done it without the support of the members of [url=http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/mjolnirbattletactics/Group/GroupHome.aspx]Mjolnir Battle Tactics[/url], and the members of the early fan fiction community who pushed me to keep writing. I'd also like to tip my hat to the [url=http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/361824/Group/GroupHome.aspx] Writers Corner[/url] for providing an easy-going place to discuss and share writing. I hope you all enjoy this story. It will take you places you never expected. It will take you through the thick and thin and through highs and lows. This is the story I've always wanted to tell. Enjoy, [i] Papa John [/i][/quote] [quote] [b][i]Entrenched[/i][/b] [i]July 31, 2010. Written by Papa John.[/i][/quote] [b][u]Table of Contents:[/u][/b] [u][i]2543[/i][/u] [b]Part One: Into the Deep[/b] [i]Chapter I: "Bird of Prey"[/i] [i]Chapter II: "The House That Funk Built" [/i] [quote][/quote] I'm going to try to stick to a biweekly chapter release schedule in the group [url=http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/mjolnirbattletactics/Group/GroupHome.aspx]Mjolnir Battle Tactics[/url] with everyone else getting each new chapter a week later. They'll be getting each chapter first in recognition of their long support of my works. Feel free to discuss the story throughout this thread, I appreciate all of your feedback and support. [i] Papa John [/i] [Edited on 08.15.2010 1:27 PM PDT]
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  • Surrounding the portside had to be nearly another score of the vessels. A cry from a faraway corner of the bay confirmed that the case was the same to the starboard. They were in the middle of some kind of flotilla. "I've seen ships like these before," a pilot spoke next to Tom. "They look like fishhooks. They're Jackals. Not the Covenant types though, they're [i]pirates[/i] apparently." Tom suppressed the humorous image of a rum-swigging swashbuckling alien Jackal, a five-foot birdlike hominid, and concentrated on the growing glow of the calm bright flash he had noted before. The ships around the [i]Everest[/i] were simultaneously engulfed in a sudden and powerful white burst of static. It was a slipspace rupture. They were jumping. The [i]Everest[/i] momentarily buckled before disappearing as quickly as it had appeared. The alien flotilla around it had created an enormous rupture in space, squeezing the larger cruiser alongside them through the hole that they had just created in the fabric of space-time. "We must have interrupted their jump. Great timing," the pilot snorted. He left towards a docked dropship. A calm female voice spoke softly, but with determination, over the COM in the hangar. It was the shipboard artificial intelligence. "Longsword pilots prepare to deploy upon re-entry and engage the Kig-Yar vessels." Cole's voice buzzed over the soft-spoken female in a blast of static: "You're our only shot at these guys. They won't be packing anything heavy but neither are we." [i]Kig-Yar[/i], or Jackals as the Marines coined them. The pilot had been correct in his observation. Jackals were nasty creatures, but certainly not the worst of the main Covenant races. Tom sighed with relief, these Jackals were rogue too; that would mean no back-up from any Covenant warships or armies. Tom slipped to the front of the dwindling crowd beside the viewport. It wouldn't be long now. The aliens could jump through slipspace nearly instantaneously--it was part of the reason the Covenant were winning the war. The hangar bay became a hub of activity as pilots loaded onto their attack craft--Longsword interceptors. Built like an oversized surface bomber, a Longsword packed missiles and nuclear warheads in its sleek black frame. They were primarily used against smaller Covenant craft in dogfights but would, perhaps, be able to take down a few of the Jackal ships. The [i]Everest [/i]tumbled out of slipspace well behind the alien flotilla that moved with purpose off towards the dark side of a large royal blue gas giant. The Everest's remaining engine turbine pumped steadily at irregular intervals, blasting the crippled giant slowly forward in a blind chase of the smaller alien ships. Tom held his helmet firmly to his head as he slid through the closing hangar doors into a darkened access corridor. Behind him the hangar exploded with the roar of engines. The hangar's gate crashed open and out flew the fighters noiselessly into space. Tom followed the bright light from a chamber across the hallway. There, he found Graves in one of the ship's many armouries. Graves toyed lightly with a pistol, waving it in his hand from side to side. A crowd had built up around the armoury's viewscreen panel. Everyone wanted to see the action. Someone yelled "Mop 'em up!" and the crowd cheered in response. On the screen, the Longswords took off at a blistering pace after the alien ships. Tom figured they didn't want to risk letting them regroup. The [i]Everest[/i] followed the scene steadily in tow. The Jackal flotilla passed into the shadow of the giant planet and disappeared with the Longswords closely behind. Tom listened intently as the COM buzzed with news from the engagement ahead. They'd taken out one, now two, of the stragglers. The Longswords were continuing pursuit to the planet's dark side. Reports of kills continued momentarily--three more ships destroyed. The fifteen or so fighters in the Longsword contingent were concentrating fire on the retreating ships. It would help level the playing field in any engagement the [i]Everest[/i] would have to make as it rounded the planet. Tom watched as the cruiser limped into orbit and slung clumsily around the planet's circumference. The COM had grown eerily quiet and Tom felt his stomach beginning to drop off into space behind him. He fixed his eyes on the viewscreen and squinted to make out the scene. "Jesus, what is that?" Graves coughed in awe. Tom's jaw grew slack as the [i]Everest[/i] slung around the planet into darkness. The Jackal flotilla had moved deep into the shadow of the planet and the Longswords had pulled off the pursuit. The fighters now lay floating weakly in front of the cruiser as it too began to brake. There in the gas giant's shadow, illuminated only by light reflected from its solid aquamarine interior, was a giant metallic ring suspended in orbit.

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