When I read the last part:
"OOOooohhh!!"
When I read everything up to that point:
"Get away from his girl, guy-with-name-I-don't-remember."
When he (main guy) said Hunters are the best:
*gives booming motion with hands* That's what I'm talkin' about. This guy knows his stuff."
I also appreciate that you don't use a lot of language. I find when other people do, it really distracts from the mood. Keep it up! Love your stories.
Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked all that and my stories.
(Warlocks are the best, though)
Yeah, I intentionally don’t use language, just to keep it nice and clean for everyone in the audience. There are of course many situations when I find that foul language is appropriate and natural for characters to use, so I have my grievances.