JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

論壇

原先發佈於:Destiny Fiction Producers
原先發佈於: FANFICTION: Delta Ch6 Part 3
5/21/2017 1:21:13 AM
1
You're definitely building suspense and thickening the plot with this chapter. Foxtrot's death seemed a little too emotional for the length of time we knew him, but I can understand its significance to Delta as he's trying to learn who he is. Liked the part of the Key Blade, that felt original and significant. Definitely one of the best chapters so far.
English

文章張貼語言:

 

以禮待人。發佈文章前請花點時間查看我們的行為準則 取消 編輯 創立火力戰隊 文章

  • 由Cyfer編輯: 5/21/2017 1:32:26 AM
    I tried to make it emotional in the way that Delta just lost a brother he didn't even know he had. It's not terribly significant, but still emotionally scarring. The Key Blade was merely a tool through which I could introduce the moon as a super weapon. I knew I wanted to make the moon this way, and I saw Oryx use his blade in the same way, so I just put the two together.

    文章張貼語言:

     

    以禮待人。發佈文章前請花點時間查看我們的行為準則 取消 編輯 創立火力戰隊 文章

你無權檢閱此內容
;
preload icon
preload icon
preload icon