As guardians one of us can only go so far but together our possibilities are limitless so join Order of Unity today you won't regret it. Together we stand alone we fall.
You certainly know how not to sell yourself. Think about the image you're giving out, it will reflect the type of person wanting to join a group with someone like you in charge... People tend to ignore a seperate recruitment post inside a popular recruitment post, just like the people posting lfg posts inside a recruitment post don't find anyone to join them!
Etiquette and respect? You'll get banned if you continually 'harass' other members of the destiny community, you might want to read the rules of the forum...