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I feel like I have a somewhat better grasp of the magic, now, though I'll admit I'm still not sure what exactly the Thread actually is. You might have explained it, and I just missed it, but it's worth looking into to see if it might've been glossed over. The evaluation was fun, but it did feel kind of weird to have Nona going from struggling with the basic spells to suddenly casting a gigantic inferno. I was expecting the fire to be a bit smaller. Though, I also get that the "great power, but no control" bit was intentional. I dig that the evaluation was rigged, though, and that the Mage's Guild has ulterior motives. Though, I don't quite understand why he couldn't have just turned him down anyway. Overall I liked it. Good fun.
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  • [quote]I feel like I have a somewhat better grasp of the magic, now[/quote] Success! Gotta love progress! Again, i think the best way to explain away these magic systems is to keep using them over and over again, with bits of explanation mixed in here and there. Hopefully, the reader'll get a grasp on ot eventually, but i might just be bad at explaining magic systems in context. Nothing more practice can't solve! I like these critiques, they're valid, but they're also exactly the questions i wanted the reader to be asking after this chapter. I've got a plaaannn (at least in my head), and if i play my cards right, it'll all make sense!

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  • While I agree most of these are good questions for me to just be wondering about after the chapter (assuming they get explained) I do think we should have a clearer grasp on what Thread is by now. I'm still not sure if I'm supposed to be imagining him moving an actual golden thread through the air, or just kind of thinking of shapes and making stuff happen.

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  • Ok, so it's more of a confusion of what is actually visible? Hm, i'll have to figure out a way to seperate the physical realm from the magicky realm better next time or in edits. Thanks for the tips, boss!

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