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It may be older, but ‘tis still a pleasant piece, my friend! I was actually surprised that it wasn’t one of your more recent works :P
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  • Well, it's not, like, old-old. Definitely post-zombie picture. I think it was actually the first thing I drew after finishing the zombie one. So, like, after you taught me better. :p I think Divine (the top one) is alright. I really like her halo, and the flowing scarf thingy is pretty nifty. She's also a bit further in the distance than the other two, which made her a little easier to draw. Six's (on the right) face was pretty good, I think, and her hair's not bad, but something about the rest of her body looks awkward. Don't know exactly what. Xi, I think, is just a disaster. His head's too big, his armor is weird, his hair just looks unnatural, and I think I forgot to darken his mask. Actually, Xi was the main reason I didn't want to draw a new version. I can't seem to get a good grasp on how his fancy futuristic robo-armor looks, and drawing eight floaty sci-fi swords is easier said than done.

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  • Edited by Gingiebread: 2/18/2022 6:06:34 AM
    Six’s stance is a little unnatural… bit stiff and thin at the shoulders, which makes her look like she’s slouching. Some definition in the arch of her back at that angle may help as well, but all that just comes with practice. I actually thought that she stood out in the picture! She’s another testament to your progress! I’m glad you saw her face and hair looked nice :P I think you should give Xi a little more credit, though. Of course there are ways to improve, but again, even in drawing him you already have. One of the reasons his hair looks unnatural could be because he doesn’t have an ear (that I can see). His body is also thinner from the side view, especially if you mentally take away that chest plate, which may give the illusion that his head is bigger than it actually is. As you continue to develop your skills you may change your mind on re-drawing this piece :D

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  • She was supposed to just be titling her head to the side, like, someone had just issued her a threat, and she was so thoroughly unimpressed, that she just held out a fireball, and tilted her head to the side like “Really? You want to fight [i]me[/i]?”. :p I don’t remember what my intention with the ear was, but I do rememberI didn’t want to show it. It was probably either supposed to be under that feather thing, or under his hair. Part of his cool robot vibe. Ears are too organic. I’m surprised Six is what stood out to be honest. I thought I did the best job on Divine. Though I might be biased, because I really love Divine’s outfit. Like, she has that classic old painting style halo, where it just surrounds their head, but then it’s also got the Trinity spokes on it. . . . That halo was, like, the easiest part of this to draw, but man do I keep talking it up. I loce that halo way more than I should. :p

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