I think you should hold off on describing the characters by their race as much. "The human", "the lycan", and so on. Every now and then is fine, but it felt a little overused as I was reading it.
I know that Condi was supposed to be somewhat amorphous, but I was kind of imagining him as wood man, while at the end he seemed to be a bit of a bug man. I don't know if that was intentional, but if not, then it might help to describe him a little bit, despite his ambiguous appearance.
I really liked the detail about the different houses, and for some reason the "fight scene" really enraptured me with how calm it was.
Very nice! Hopefully I'll read the next part sooner after its posting! :p
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Right. I was trying to vary up my nouns and pronouns, but i can tone it down with the races. For Condi, his main aspect is his evolving nature, but i might've gone a little too far with the tree-evoking word choices and the bug-evoking word choices. I don't want to mske it spund like he's switching races, but i do want to emphasize his evolutions befause they're cool. I think i just need to get a little more comfortable with the character.