Maybe give the protagonist some healthy paranoia? Like, who are you people, why’d you save me, is this a trick? I dunno, I’m a terrible writer.
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She did. Had a whole freakout thing.
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Yeah, I’m at a loss. Perhaps swap to the assassins POV for a bit? Hint their motivations a little, stuff like that?
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The assassin’s working for someone else; they wouldn’t know the whole plan. I have to be careful how fast I reveal the villain’s motives, too, because it’s oe of the major plot twists.
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I’m fresh out of ideas then. I hope you figure something out though!
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*sits down and patiently waits for Blueberry*