good job! I must admit however, I was a little confused coming off of the last chapter I was kind of expecting a continuation of the story, but this is fine.
Edit: not sure if I missed a chapter or two or not.
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Oooh ..what was the last chapter you read about?
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you trying to get onto your ship.
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Editado por Shadow_Sov: 8/19/2019 9:46:49 PMOHHH you missed one https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/253193822/0/0
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could you link it to me?
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https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/253193822/0/0