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Edited by xJINCHOx: 4/18/2013 5:50:53 PM
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IS IT ANY GOOD?

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Hidden potential but Glad I could read it!

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Hey guys xD! I wrote something today and I wanted to ask you guys if it's any good! It may have some errors so just know that I'll get to them. Just read it and comment what you guys think ^_^! Hate? Like? Comment! I can take it haha xD! In a small little island, there was a small little town were boys and girls normally frown. In this little island, people did not care for anything, no, they did not understand. They lived empty lives, they pursued empty goals, they only wanted to get by, simply thinking, "just don't die." This is a simple story, about a simple boy, who found something new to this little island, yes, something truly grand. A thing that many have not yet encountered, no not many can even imagine how this can be plundered. Poor simple boy wanted something. A thing that could fill the emptiness inside him. Simple boy felt down and grim, because he could not find what he wanted, nothing special for him. He looked far and wide in this little island, searching for someone that could fill the simple little mold of his simple little heart. Someone that could make him happy, make him laugh, simply a person to be beside him. A person that could love his little heart and his little mind. Poor Simple boy got heart broken. He kept trying to fit things in his little heart that did not belong there. No, they did not care. Simple boy patiently tried and tried again, not being able to feel any gain, just a hurtful strain of dark emotions, poor Simple boy could not sustain. Simple boy wished he hadn't tried again. Simple boy felt alone. Simple boy did not know what to do. Simple boy felt that what he thought was true, "No one fits inside my little heart" he said, not knowing there was a Special girl looking for a heart to fit into. No, he could not imagine what was in wait for him. Simple boy only knew what pain felt, and agony tasted like. How could poor Simple boy find the strength to hold on to his simple little life. Simple boy was too close to the edge. But Simple boy kept holding on. Simple boy almost giving up, at last met the Special girl. He could se that the Special girl was very different from the people of the Small little island. Simple boy was afraid, thinking that this could be a trap, feeling a bit insecure. Simple boy still was feeling heart broken, but Special girl made the pain go away. Special girl made everything alright. Special girl was kind, she was thoughtful, Special girl was very beautiful. Simple boy began to think that Special girl was the perfect girl to fit the small little mold of his small little heart. Simple boy did not know what to do, unable to understand completely what was happening. Simple boy thought it was all a dream, but no. Finally Simple boy took Special girl and for one last time tried and saw that Special girl fit perfectly in his little mold of his little heart. Simple boy could feel the warmth inside him now. Simple boy could see that the emptiness inside him was gone. Simple boy is Happy now. Even if all the people left in the small little island did not care for anything, Simple boy and Special girl were happy they could be together, knowing that they would have each other forever. Simple boy and Special girl lived happily forever after  :')

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