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originally posted in: D2 Poetry SUNSHOT
Edited by Astrosa: 4/30/2022 8:17:09 AM
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Beautiful I just so happen to be a poet myself Only part of it change was the [quote]Just pull it’s white trigger to activate, It goes off with a satisfactory “bang!”[/quote] Part The flow of “activate” and “it” doesn’t sound entirely right but can be easily fixed. Perhaps with something like Just pull it’s white trigger, and off it goes with a satisfactory “bang!” Really like it tho Very catchy [spoiler]don’t look at my linked account name :)[/spoiler]
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