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Edited by Unseelie Nil:
12/15/2020 7:04:38 AM
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The Rise and Fall of the Witch Queen
[spoiler]I hated this unedited rough draft so I'm going to fix it.[/spoiler]
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*lights stogie* War... War never changes.
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2 RepliesWell done!
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3 RepliesCool story, Though needs more dragons. (≧艸≦*)
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Huh, nice read
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Cool.
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1 Reply[b]K[/b]
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1 ReplyDo you feel attached to these characters?
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9 Replies[quote]There were tales that she could bring the dead back to life and so desperate souls saught me out to bring their loved ones back to life.[/quote]Only thing that erks me. More specifically the fact that ''Back to Life'' is said twice but with the exact same lines. I Thought about it and came up with: [quote]There were tales that she could bring the dead back to life and so desperate souls saught me out in hopes of protecting their fragmented will.[/quote]
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I dig it
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Literally the best piece of writing on the forums in like a solid month
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3 RepliesSpew more words out at 3am.
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6 Repliesgo to sleep nil
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1 ReplyWhat I love about this is that the story flows neatly. It leaves room for the reader to see it in their heads.
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1 ReplyOh very well done, very well done indeed!
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4 RepliesVery well done! This is old era RP thread material!
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sick. nice narrative voice.
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[spoiler]bnump[/spoiler]
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