Well, I finally got to read this. Great work, and I’ll assume everyone else has already given you far more than any feedback I could hope to give. So here’s my million-dollar question, though I know I needn’t ask: May I add this to the [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/245771343/0/0]Archive[/url]? [spoiler]The Archive is a collection of posts on Destiny Companion. They contain an alphabetical list of writers in the Destiny community and links to their stories and creative writings. Basically, with your permission, I put your name in with a link to your writing. You get all the credit, and everyone has easy access to your story at all times. To find out more about the Archive, follow the link above (click the yellow word “Archive”). If you do not respond, I will assume you are inactive and wait about a week before adding your story to the Archive. If at any time you ask me to remove your story from the Archive, I will do so.[/spoiler]