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4/21/2022 8:47:39 PM
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D2 Poetry SUNSHOT

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(Note: I wrote this poem a few years ago so it kinda sucks) SUNSHOT Who can outrun the sunrise? “Not I” says a lonely ghost Not Taken, Fallen, Scorn or Hive Of this I can certainly boast. Just pull it’s white trigger to activate, It goes off with a satisfactory “bang!” Then watch and smile and laugh and wait As it’s target is consumed by flame. It’s perfect appearance will never be lost It’s time will never be done. This that I speak of is called Sunshot, For who can outrun the sun?
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  • Holy crap this is the best poem I’ve ever heard

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    • [quote]THE LAW Who can run before the sun rises? "I'm not," he said in a low voice. Do not despise; You can brag. Just pull the white stem to awaken it. "It exploded!" Then laugh and wait. The stone was burned. His good looks are endless. Time will not work. I’m talking about sunscreen. Who can run before the sun goes down? [/quote]

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    • Edited by Astrosa: 4/30/2022 8:17:09 AM
      Beautiful I just so happen to be a poet myself Only part of it change was the [quote]Just pull it’s white trigger to activate, It goes off with a satisfactory “bang!”[/quote] Part The flow of “activate” and “it” doesn’t sound entirely right but can be easily fixed. Perhaps with something like Just pull it’s white trigger, and off it goes with a satisfactory “bang!” Really like it tho Very catchy [spoiler]don’t look at my linked account name :)[/spoiler]

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      • I think it’s great.[spoiler]licks finger [/spoiler]

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        • Pretty good but could use some rhyming [spoiler]I know not all poems need it, but it just makes it sound better[/spoiler]

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