When I read the last part:
"OOOooohhh!!"
When I read everything up to that point:
"Get away from his girl, guy-with-name-I-don't-remember."
When he (main guy) said Hunters are the best:
*gives booming motion with hands* That's what I'm talkin' about. This guy knows his stuff."
I also appreciate that you don't use a lot of language. I find when other people do, it really distracts from the mood. Keep it up! Love your stories.
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Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked all that and my stories. (Warlocks are the best, though) Yeah, I intentionally don’t use language, just to keep it nice and clean for everyone in the audience. There are of course many situations when I find that foul language is appropriate and natural for characters to use, so I have my grievances.