Great work! [quote]Giant’s starship, [i]The Avenging Eagle[/i] streaked across the sky as a torrent of snow battered the -blam!-’s front viewport.[/quote] Did you mean “the ship’s front viewport”? [quote]Ever hear of Keksis, the Betrayed?[/quote] [b][i][u]KEKSIS, THE BETRAYED!!!!!![/u][/i][/b] [quote]Giant was cut off by a sudden [i]THUMP[/i] from behind him. “Hello there.” A deep, rough voice said.[/quote] General Kenobi! [quote]You see, I’m the voice inside his head[/quote] No, that’s me [quote]Several Vandals were hanging from the ceiling, their rifles pointed right at him.[/quote] This deserves a sneak peak of a line from a future chapter of Lost In Thought: [i]"They're like spiders! Alien spiders with guns! I'm sorry! I'm panicking!"[/i] -Blanc [quote]Tinny[/quote] Do you mean Tiny (small), or Tinny (metal or lacking depth)? [quote]...I’ve missed you. It gets lonely out here sometimes.” She put a hand on his shoulder. “I missed you too.”[/quote] Be still my heart