Meh, could use some work.

Well, this was my second review ever... It shows.

If you're determined to continue on this road, you're gonna need to get a new mic. The distortion issue is probably apparent... and regardless of what you're implying, the book comment wasn't needed/simply wasn't executed well. /Teh puma's only complaints.

You can't expect to be a TotalBiscuit or AngryJoe on your second video, but this is a great (second) start. - Try to add more emphasis, more emotion into your voice. Talk like you care what you're talking about. - Do spoiler alerts, even minor ones in future videos (yes, yes it's Halo 4 everyone's played it). - Video distortion. Youtube has some interesting encoding issues, I've heard of others having a tonne of problems with it as well. Research a bit.

Please try to fix the video distortion, I know others have told you as well but it is very distracting. Also try to add some enthusiasm to your voice, it was a little monotone. Adding very light background music might also help and to cut out areas where you are not speaking. Overall the video was great just a little buggy.

Really, Brute, as a budding writer, you should realise that complaining that backstory is explained in books, and actually stating 'no-one really reads anymore' is ignorant at best and shocking at worst. I know that 343 didn't explain the Storm Covenant's presence in the game very well, but implying that many fans will have no idea what's going on because they're dumb-blam!-s just isn't something you should do. If fans want to discover more, they have an immense wealth of fiction to explore, and blaming 343 for some fans' ignorance or laziness is just ignorant in itself. The rest of the review? Well, I'm 5 minutes and it's pretty meh; as per your last review, you ramble a lot. Yes, Requiem's sky towers are an initially sublime view, but any illusion of free exploration is soon shattered when we're funnelled down Warthog ramps, which is nothing like how we were first allowed to drive in Halo: CE. And the Didact does not have a 'British' accent (there's a huge number of British accents, so kindly specify): listen to him, he rolls his Rs. It's like claiming Andrew Ryan had an English accent because he came from an older period of American history. Oh, and John and Cortana most certainly do not share a love story. Perhaps they love each other in a strictly platonic and functional sense, but it's an enormous mistake to imply any kind of romantic or inter-personal connection between them. What their relationship is is an incredibly powerful bond; two entities who have fought through hell with and for each other, and share an incredible connection because of it. Not traditional love at all.

Crap. I see that there is a lot of distortion... Why is it doing this!!!?!?!?!!!!

A good review overall, but you'll need to figure out how to fix that distortion. And try not to but your mouth too close to the mic. I can hear your breath come through as you speak and it makes it sound bad. I pretty much agree with you, I feel that Halo 4 is a nicely done game. Although the custom games and forge are a bit lacking. And I wish the multiplayer didn't have all those COD features in it, but it's still super fun. I feel they could have introduced the Didact better too.

Cool video. Just a little question, do you have a youtube channel? If so, can you link me to it. OT: Interesting perspective. Your views are pretty interesting even though they conflict mine. Your understanding of the lore is pretty annoying. But I understand your point about reading books to understand the story. But reading the books only enhances the experience. But we can all agree on this, Halo 4's story is beautiful if you understand it.