I really like the little (or not so little) excerpts you put at the start of each chapter, I think it's awesome how it adds another layer of insight into the characters, great job!
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Thanks! We only get 10,000 characters (letters, punctuation etc) per post on this forum so it's really a lot of fun to get as much story and characterization as I can into such a short space. Leads to doing things like the quotes, pretty much accidentally. Glad you're enjoying the read!
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No doubt I'll continue enjoying the read as long as you keep writing the read, so please don't stop anytime soon :P