*cutscene*
Cahl-rin: Your ghost should stay outside, just in case the door seals again.
Ghost: Don't worry , I reprogrammed it not to shut on us. We should be fine.
Guardian: Hey, I can't see a thing.
Cahl-rin: What are you talking about? I see you perfectly. Just walk across the bridge and come to us.
Guardian: It's pitch black. Are you sure we opened the right place?
Ghost: Perhaps...it would help if I turned on the lights....give me a second.......there.
*a large orb on the ceiling illuminates a huge spherical chamber. Pods line the walls. Each pod contains a body of some unknown species.
Guardian: What...are they?
Ghost: .......
*The guardian looks toward the center of the chamber. A bridge connects the entrance to a large round platform. On it is a large black mass. As he nears it, the mass appears to be made of tar-like black tendrils. The bodies of 7 guardians appear to partially submerged into the mass. They have no flesh left, only skeletal remains.
Cahl-rin: Well Guardian? Let's get moving. We need to get out of here.
Guardian: Ghost...are these the guardians we were looking for?
Ghost: Yes....
Guardian: Then how...is he talking to us?
Cahl-rin: I am right here in front you. I.....what? Wait....what's going on? Would everybody shut up?!? I'm trying to tal...wait......no......................
Guardian: Cahl-rin?
Cahl-rin: That's...right. We weren't ambushed by fallen. We came in here.....and then we died. Haha.....how could I forget....it wanted....to.........get out................
Ghost: Guardian....I think we should start moving.
*the ghost is looking around at the pods...a tarry black substance begins to pour out of the organisms' eyes and mouth. It begins to seep through the cracks in the glass. More tendrils begin to creep up the walls of the chamber, towards the entrance. The black mass in the middle begins to move. The guardian's bodies begin to dissolve. The substance begins to move for the guardian. Cahl-rin's scream blasts over the transmission, joined by the screams of other tormented souls. Faces of torment form on the black ooze's surface, their eyeless sockets appear to be looking at the guardian hungrily. Some of them are humanoid, some of them are Fallen in shape. But most of them resemble the species in the stasis pods.
Cahl-rin: ......THEY WON'T STOP SCREAMING....THEY ARE....US...........*he screams as if he were being tortured.
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This one mission has more story depth then all of destiny
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Can someone just -blam!-ing hire this guy at Bungie already? I'd pay to have his creative stories in a video game. Jeez
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Long face is awesome. Check out his other thread on suggestions for destiny!
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Love it
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Very impressive work sir.
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Awesome =) write it as a fiction =) I want to know more!
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You are still a massive PATATO! !!
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-blam!-. now i'm scared. This is bloody awesome for anyone with more horror tolerance than me
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Obviously it could use some polishing from a professional, otherwise very impressive. I would play it:)
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Cool Story Bro. They should make this into a raid!
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I think it should be made into a " Raid" mission. Sounds like " the blob ".
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This just gave me the chills. And i mean the creepy kind
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Dude, this is great.
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Good story. I would play this mission
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Love it that one mission would be 100x better than the whole destiny campaign.
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Awesome!
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Im waiting for the next part T^T Ive been waiting for like... 10 hours man T^T where is it?
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Later....possibly.
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Then I shall wait and check this thread every few hours
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Love it Longface! Whether it be a satire post or a serious one like this! I love em all!
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Now THAT is a mission I would love to play! Epic work dude.
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Edited by Zenith: 10/3/2014 12:58:33 PMOK. I think this is some really great stuff that you're putting up on here. I only have a few problems, but those are fine because this is only a draft. My biggest concern is 4 elite guardians that went missing. Maybe you could change it to a group of 2 non-elite guardians just scouting out the ship? Possibly one of them die/or both of them. Maybe one could go AWOL out of pure fear and you have to find him before you leave. Maybe one of the scouts could be scared shitless like that one guy in HALO and he's just petrified in a corner/dead end. Just some quick constructive criticism from me from school. Keep up the good work!
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Godlike as use.
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Dude that is amazing.