I'll switch out every now and then from third to first, for an example:
[i]He sat silently in the mist shroud, half dazed yet half comforted. He saw an eerie man approach.. [/i]
Huh? I don't remember coming accompanied..
(Just a dumb example from top of my mind)
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I think you should incorporate this scene into the story at some point. I think it will add the tiniest bit of mysterious flair.
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