What do you think? Previous video https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lUlOI0OZo74
The video length should be about 5-6 times the length. Not bad with the sniper though.
Where are the tips? This is a short gameplay clip. Also, the narration needs work, it didn't sound smooth at all. Keep it up though, you can always improve
Add more tips. It was basically a video to show your sniper skills instead