You should prob make this more clearer that it is fanfiction, I doubt most people will notice the little #fiction in the corner.
I was confused because you painted all the factions in a dark light which I am not expecting in reality =p Though New monarchy is very likely pretty close, I get a knights templar feel from them.
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Apart from labeling it as "Story" and "Fiction" and stating repeatedly "This is a fanfic," I'm not sure what else you think I should do?. Unfortunately, I'm unwilling to change the title. I suppose I could put a note at the bottom of my story....