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originally posted in: Critique the hell out of this.
5/4/2014 2:32:52 AM
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The first part with the piano seems out of place with the other music. I would use one or the other, but not both. I feel there's too much bed in the video. Show the room instead. Use close-up and wide shots. I guess that was the living room? Here's an idea: Shoot yourself and maybe friends in your room/living room. Then transition to where they're no longer there. It will give it more of loss type of feeling IMO.
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