The first part with the piano seems out of place with the other music. I would use one or the other, but not both. I feel there's too much bed in the video. Show the room instead. Use close-up and wide shots. I guess that was the living room?
Here's an idea: Shoot yourself and maybe friends in your room/living room. Then transition to where they're no longer there. It will give it more of loss type of feeling IMO.
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[quote]Here's an idea: Shoot yourself and maybe friends in your room/living room.[/quote] I laffed
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You made me laugh.
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Ok, will try that out.
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[quote]Here's an idea: Shoot yourself[/quote]The moderation on this site is really going downhill.