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Can someone give me tips on how to get better at writing stories.

Usually I have great ideas. My story begins really great.. in the middle it may drag on and I start changing my mind about things ..and my end kinda fails.. Besides practise, can you guys give me more tips?
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    benis - old

    Fap.
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  • Outlines. Make an outline and stick to it.
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  • Include me. A story is not a story without me in it.
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  • Practice on how to resolve your stories then?
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  • Edited by ASoapyboxlolz: 1/3/2014 5:09:19 PM
    lol fgt writing stories. Cum a pro like me. Like this. WATCH WATCH THE STORY! Jimmy was smoking meth, high and mad he tried to stand up and make his way to his bedroom door and open it to get out. When he tried to stand up, his legs kept shaking like they were refusing to listen to Jimmy. Jimmy became frustrated, shouting out from the top of his lungs, "-blam!- YOU! THIS IS MY BODY BITCH!" and it was clear that Jimmy really wanted to stand up, control his body and assert his authority. Jimmy quickly grabbed the table leg with his left hand and stood up after an excessive amount of effort. A loud "-blam!- YEH BITCH!" came out of Jimmies mouth followed by some coughing and snorting. Jimmy smiled as he looked around the room while standing up as if he had accomplished a gold medal in an Olympic race. A proud sense of awesomeness came over Jimmy. Jimmy fixated his view on the door handle and (slowly) made his way to the door. After 5 minutes of struggling Jimmy got to the door. "IM THE -blam!-ING BOMB!" he shouted. A loud smash was heard by Jimmy, followed by sirens which caused Jimmy to halt and fall on the floor. Loud thumps came from the front door from downstairs as if someone was emphasizing a rock hitting a door. Jimmy quickly stood up with a burst of energy, "MOTHER-blam!-ERS, SUCK MA DICK COKZ!". Jimmy with a burst of energy moved to the door and opened it. As he went out the door, he heard gun shots and helicopter sounds. "YOU'LL NEVER CATCH ME COPPERZ!". Running, Jimmy traveled down the stairs and approached the front door of his small apartment. He opened the door really fast, seeing 5 police men with machetes and rpg's and pistols looking at him with a helicopter also flying around his apartment in the sky Jimmy quickly wanted to show his rebellious nature and lack of care. Grabbing his dick, Jimmy shouted "LOOK AT THIS BITCH, IM A MAN!", Jimmy quickly took off his pants. The police men had a shocked look on their faces. Jimmy felt a sense of entitlement. He grabbed his dick and soon he started fapping "OHHH OHHH, OOHHHH BABAY, -blam!- THE POLICE, OH YES LIKE THAT OHHH! -blam!-ING BOMB!". The astonished police men shouted "Surrender, otherwise we'll shoot you...possibly your penis". Jimmy didn't care he felt a rush of excitement and felt like a badass, he felt an orgasm coming. "OH IM GONNA CUM, OH!". "Last chance sir!" The police officer shouted. A load moan came from Jimmies mouth as he ejaculated, huge amounts of jizz came from his dick. The police men were astonished as the jizz just didn't stop and poured all over the police officers and flew onto the helicopters pilot causing the copter to crash into Jimmy's house. "OH BABY!" The angry police officers shot of Jimmy penis. Jimmy screamed and fell to the floor..little did Jimmy know that he would never experience an orgasm again.
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    • Be unpredictable. Sometimes sticking to cliche can drain your enthusiasm, and mixing things up keeps them fresh.
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    • Plan it first.
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    • Show, don't tell. My creative writing teacher would always tell us that. She always said "check the wiki", too.
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    • Use words.
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    • If a story changes based on how your characters are built, let it. If you build strong characters they are bound to develop the story accordingly.
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