I like it! Please continue!
Dont like it, get back to work!
I would like to start off this by thanking Malcolm FleX from the Bungie Community for giving me a Beta Code during the process of writing this story.
This is a story I have been and still working on for about a month or two. I originally started writing to see if someone could appreciate it enough (see above), then it turned into hoping some very person in the community could give me a Beta Code (yet again, see above), now I want a writer of Destiny to look at this and give me his/her opinion on it. Please spread the word if you like it and tell me because I'm starting to get skeptical about getting a professionals opinion.