Yes, no? Should I feel bad for it being bad?
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next time you do this start with a real catalyst, start the story off so everything is in balance for your main character...the create a big event where something changes his life...the pinch is where the plot line twists leading towards a crisis, the moment of no return for the main character to make the final decision towards the BIG EVENT...the big event is the showdown between the main individuals ending with the realization in the end....most good scripts follow the 7 act format And also dont be afraid to act like total morons...we're the only ones watching it