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originally posted in: So how can this improve?
1/11/2013 1:33:18 AM
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Didn't need to play the entire intro at the beginning and your favourite part lacked context. Your voice is monotone, not the greatest. You might want to have a script for future projects, but it wasn't that bad. Not bad, but could use some work.
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