Sadly, I never got time to read this story, but cut content is honestly one of my favorite topics! I love hearing about how the developments of a story changed behind the scenes, either getting scrapped completely, or winding up as something totally different than the original concept!
I wish I had some neat examples to share, but I’ve rarely posted my writing on here, so it wouldn’t make much sense..
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Spoiler alert! [spoiler]Nil dies.[/spoiler]
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I knew that bit, actually. On the one bit of the story I commented on I saw someone talking about it! [spoiler]Did Nil at least die in some super cool way?[/spoiler]
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Nil actually died awhile ago and something else has been using her body as a puppet. I even left a bunch of subtle and not so subtle hints too:( Like, I've talked about how evil and terrifying the ocean is many times and no one thought twice about Nil returning to Offtopic in a boat and bringing a big wave with her!
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[quote]Nil actually died awhile ago and something else has been using her body as a puppet. I even left a bunch of subtle and not so subtle hints too:([/quote] Oh, that makes sense why someone was called “NotNil” in your post up there, then! I was wondering what was up with that! [quote]Like, I've talked about how evil and terrifying the ocean is many times and no one thought twice about Nil returning to Offtopic in a boat and bringing a big wave with her![/quote] To be fair, though, it really is terrifying. No extra narrative needed. The water level in Little Nightmares was the only bit of the game that freaked me out enough to put the game down for a bit. [spoiler]On an unrelated note, you would probably know; What’s the character limit for a post here? I was thinking of posting one of my stories![/spoiler]
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Edited by Unseelie Nil: 1/15/2020 11:29:34 PM8500! But twice that if you make a "Question Post" and mark your comment as the answer so its always at the top!
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Cool, that should be enough! Now I just got to find a way to get people to not just look at it, go “Faeries? How lame.” and walk away..
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A lot of people only joined after you became infect/possessed. I don't really remember it either. [spoiler]Doesn't make it any less cool tho![/spoiler]
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Also, to be fair, I never outright said Nil was possessed or anything like that, just left little hints every now and then. I think I told one of the heads this already, but it started with a hastily written story to end the Nil of Winter bit on my alt, that I forgot to put my tag on, so its lost to bungos website. Basically Nil of Winter went crazy, then killed other Nil (Nil of Autumn, while I'm dumping old lore that I'm pretty sure is never stated anywhere outside of a few conversations) and trapped her soul in a mirror. In the last story, Winter is talking about evil stuff or something then notices Autumn in the mirror acting strangely. Autumn turns to her with no eyes, clawing away at herself leaving wounds like dark empty voids, and says something eerie and out of character, then breaks out of the mirror and kills Winter. I dont remember it all exactly though. It was like a year or two ago I think!
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That's a bit dark... But definitely in character! Now I'm disappointed it's lost to the void...
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A lot, but not all.