Nice. Only 2 things that I'm feeling a little nitpicky about and it's really nothing. 1) thumbing the trigger. Not sure how that works and should be thinking gun safety first dont touch the trigger till you're ready to shoot. And 2) I wouldnt really say it was murder of uldren. Maybe more of a mercy kill in my opinion. But yeah I can see it as murder still. Idk. Like I said not really anything just a quick thought
As far as thumbing the trigger, I understand the whole safety thing but remember he has forgotten the fear of death due to immortality. Also, I would consider it a murder because of the whole falling to darkness vibe Forsaken had and also because Uldren didn't seem to want to die. He may have been resigned, but not suicidal or mortally wounded by the space butthole.