[spoiler]I hated this unedited rough draft so I'm going to fix it.[/spoiler]
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[quote]There were tales that she could bring the dead back to life and so desperate souls saught me out to bring their loved ones back to life.[/quote]Only thing that erks me. More specifically the fact that ''Back to Life'' is said twice but with the exact same lines. I Thought about it and came up with: [quote]There were tales that she could bring the dead back to life and so desperate souls saught me out in hopes of protecting their fragmented will.[/quote]