Some tenses got a little sloppy, but a thoroughly enjoyable read, plenty of action infused with comedy. And Lillie is the second cutest kinderguardian in the Tower (after Petra of course). And please, ignore the downvoting weiners. They have a vendetta against all fanfiction.
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Well of course nobody can outcute Petra. But thanks for the kind words. You know if you want to use Lillie for any more kinderguardian stories you can. AltGamingBros did say he wants to expand our universe to more writers