One small suggestion...[i]maybe try not to cram in literally as much as you can.[/i] It would help in the long run...
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Actually I felt that this one didn't have enough content. It literally took me 3 minutes to read, whereas the other ones i was poring over it for 10 minutes. However, still enjoyable. P.S. I would really love to play with you sometime, friend me on xbox @Jailbreak5106
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I actually wasn’t this time. This is just how I write. I do episodes. But yeah I’ll try to keep it shorter
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Episodes? [i]Curious...[/i]
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Yeah, almost like you’re reading a tv show