originally posted in:Destiny Fiction Producers
These look really interesting. i like how you edit each character to have a certain personality, making each character it's own individual. it's interesting and can capture the readers attention. I also like how you go into detail about appearance. sometimes if you don't know what a character looks like people get connotations based on their attitude which could be bad or good depending on the personality.
i'm really excited to read the story because i'm interested in how each character can develop, the things they can go through or how events change their life.
the fact that it's set after d2 could be really interesting too. you could develop certain events or happenings, even relationships etc that could alter the characters attitude to others, trust etc and it'd be cool to see if you get any flashbacks in.
if you read all that then 👍 and keep writing good.
first bump
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Thank you for all your input.
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you're welcome :) anytimeee