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Timelines table of contents

https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/224015060/0/0/link Chapter 1 Https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/224881730/0/0/link Chapter 2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/225412781/0/0/link Chapter 3 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/225848384/0/0link Chapter 4 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/225887476/0 Chapter 5 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/225959734/0/0 Chapter 6 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226012887/0/0 Chapter 7 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226228237/0/0 Chapter 8 part 1 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226267436/0/0 Chapter 8 part 2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226306809/0/0 Chapter 8 part 3 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226426088/0/0 Chapter 8 part 4 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226460418/0/0 Chapter 9 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226542809/0/0 Chapter 10 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226566137/0/0 Chapter 11 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226579679/0/0 Chapter 12 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226808885/0/0 Chapter 13 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226903606/0/0 Chapter 14 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226917176/0/0 Chapter 15 part 1 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226953279/0/0 Chapter 15 part 2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226978300/0/0 Chapter 16 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226992189/0/0 Chapter 17 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227002730/0/0 Chapter 18 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227226145/0/0 Chapter 19 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227310540/0/0 Chapter 20 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227554287/0/0 Chapter 21 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227605425/0/0 Chapter 22 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227628307/0/0 Chapter 23 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227732587/0/0 chapter 24 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227771170/0/0 chapter 25 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227800464/0/0 chapter 26 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227829856/0/0 chapter 27 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/227891400/0/0 chapter 28 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/228462979/0/0 Chapter 29 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/228511977/0/0 chapter 30 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/228860964/0/0 chapter 31 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/228978808/0/0 chapter 32 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/229239076/0/0 chapter 33 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/229272907/0/0 chapter 34 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/229445721/0/0 chapter 35 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/229445982/0/0 Epilogue. This is my story timelines. It takes place in an alternate universe where the Lysander won the faction wars and now controls the Last City.

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  • Final critique: Your story gave an answer to the question that's been nagging many fans familiar with the lore: what would happen if the Concordat had won? Instead of taking us the safe path, in a Guardian's eyes, you showed us the story of a normal man raised in a City ruled by Lysander. It was both thrilling and tragic, with hope interspersed throughout. I didn't see the end coming, but it offered closure on all the important points...absolutely. Writing definitely improved as it progressed, but that's always to be expected. Very glad to have read this, and someone would have to work pretty hard to make it better. Bump!

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