First, your in the wrong section, second your voice acting sounds a tad flat and unemotional and your humor can use a bit of work, otherwise you'll forever be a derivative clone of Red vs Blue.
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There's like a million other machinimas like mine and it's not a copy of rvb because that derives around multiple characters mines only 2
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[quote]There's like a million other machinimas like mine[/quote] There's your first problem, you have to bring something original to the table. Show me you're not a copy, because all I can think of when viewing your work is "Well, it's sorta like a less funny Red vs Blue."
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Using less characters doesn't not make it a bad clone. I'm not saying it is, but having lower production value doesn't make it different enough. But I haven't watched it dear (I won't) so I can't say for sure if it is any good