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Deep within the dark trench in the Vordt Valley lies a deep tunnel known as "The Aitken Abyss" here the order of the red Cross resides. An ancient people who dwell in darkness and practice forbidden spells and rituals in hopes of conjuring demons. Their leader, Gorath (pronounced gor-wrath) harnessed the power of hell to transform himself and his followers into demonic beings of immense power. The order of the red sun takes on the appearance of humans, but when in the presence of holy items, they can not approach. They feel a power of light push them away from whatever possesses the item. Gorath weilds the most powerful transmorgified battle axe known to all "Apallonius, Bringer of Fate" every enemy he strikes down with Apallonius, he gains more power, the souls of the damned are trapped and reside within the blade of the axe. When he strikes it down, all the souls are released on his opponent, and the souls viciously tear apart their target, for the soul that kills their masters enemy, will be set free. Gorath rules the Aitken Abyss with an Iron Fist, plotting to grow his cult and expand his empire. The order of the red Cross have a very basic goal, to rule the surface world, and then perform the ritual of Jalill inside the earth's core. This will transform earth and turn it into the ideal vision of what hell would look like. Gorath and his following do not lurk in the daylight unless it is completely necessary, they lurk in towns at night, feeding on any passing by traveler who is foolish enough to be swayed by their tounges of silver. The order of the red Cross is heavily focused on tradition and honor to the dark lord, Grimlock. They progress in the hierarchy by defeating one another in duels of fate, they fight until death, and the winner will devour their opponent in front of all of the Abyss. The Vordt Valley holds many unholy beings of great malice such as Prygen the great serpent, Ralok the defiled prince, and Olaron general of the skeleton legion. The entrance to the Aitken Abyss is guarded by Prygen the great Serpent and the army of skeletons headed by Olaron. Ralok the defiled prince is simply the soul of a prince lost to the ages, roaming the land, slaying anything that come within arms reach. Not even the order of the red cross dare to tangle with this lost spirit. The Vordt Valley is dark and deep, only those who either have a death wish or the courage of 1,000,000 barbarians dare enter. Only one person has been inside the Valley, her name is Evelyn, the Bandit. She has told everyone in the land the stories of the things and master she saw in that deep dark place. One can question if you can truly trust the sayings a bandit, let alone a bandit who has no honor or respect for the land. but then again, why lie about what lies within the coldest circle of hell known as the Vordt Valley?
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  • Holy f***ing hell that's pretty boss... Besides a few name changes (to coincide with key places and stuff like that) its pretty amazing! Now can I ask, is this meant to be an actual Abyss or can it reside on a different plane of existence? This would work well in the Shadowfell (Not hell but a twisted distortion of the Material Plane [the world] made by the god of darkness and despair)

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  • That works

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  • Alright! I'll add this to my notes/the post. If you got any more ideas, feel free to continue on

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