Oh my what a good read that was, I must say from how you imagined the Crotas end mechanic to how you re imagined the story of the husk of the pit I must say everything in this book apart from a few spelling mistakes is absolutely flawless and would definitely be on my read again list, Good job!
P.s. Did anyone else think that toland spoke with count Dokus accent ?
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Glad you enjoyed it! The raid mechanics were actually some of the harder parts to write, because I had to figure out how Eris and her fire team would've discovered them, and how they fit within the lore of the game itself. Again, thanks for the comment! I'm always happy when someone enjoys the story. :D
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Download grammarly, it'll do the grammar work for you, thank you for the amazing read!
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you're welcome!