{{
`${userDetail.user.displayName}${userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode ? `#${standardizeBungieGlobalCode(userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode)}` : ""}`}}
{{getUserClans()}}
Edited by TheSuMan:
2/25/2017 2:42:26 AM
59
Into the Hellmouth: A Destiny Story
Hello, everybody! Some of you may know me, some of you may not. Almost a year ago, I began writing a Destiny Fanfiction, Into the Hellmouth. It's a chronicle of the failed raid on Crota's end that Eris embarked upon with her companions. 105,000 words later, here is the completed version! I've striven to keep it as lore-accurate as possible, but needless to say, a good amount of it is speculation. However, if you like, go on and give it a read! I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rdHOZSV61CYLjCQr6v_j6ygP-6AinEmE77sWtou3DHw/edit?usp=sharing
Also, if there are any Bungie employees reading this, I'd love to find a way to make this cannon. :D
Edit: Thanks for all the love on this post, guys! Really glad to see that you enjoyed it!
-
3 RepliesOverall, a very good read. However, there are a lot of errors in this work. For instance, you refer to Sai as a man and a woman several times when Eris and Sai are in the server room. I fully understand that this is a huge undertaking, but these errors can be confusing. When referring to Executor Ho, you refer to him as Ho and Lysander. Stick with one and leave it as that. Do not take my pointing out some errors as a slap in the face. Instead, think of them as trying to give you encouragement to always get better. I give an 83/100.
