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Are you sure???
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A few grammar mistakes but I don't care about that
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I'm sorry I need to fix them. Can you tell me which places I made mistakes??
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I'm kinda in the middle something right now but once I'm done I will look for them
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Okie I will wait
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Paragraph 4 and 9 when reading them, sound a bit janky
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I will fix them