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10/10/2016 6:09:33 PM
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[quote]Most likely. I’ll transmat us to the ship now.”[/quote] Definitely work on dialogue. (I realize this is only second chapter) But you could make it seem a bit more interesting, and make it transition better. The minor things really make a difference. "Most likely. So, yeah, I'll take us up to the ship now..."
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