Did you edit it, this is a lot different than what I remembered reading earlier. :o
I didn't know this version. ^-^
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Yeah, someone said I had a flaw, so I found extra research and realized multiple different races have their own version of the story. It took longer than it should have to edit...
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I think that was me. ^-^'
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It was, actually. Hey, if I'm going to make these might as well make them right :p
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I will say, though, I did like your old format better, where you explained it all in your own words, rather than using quotes and then explaining it. Either way, looking forward to reading the rest of these. :)
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I only did that because it's hard to state that in your own words. But I think the rest of my posts will be only my voice, with maybe one quote at the beginning
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Oh don't worry, I understand that perfectly. Paraphrasing is hard. I always end up going fairly close to word fir word. :p