Your loadout is great for crucible since you use a shotgun and hand cannon. But, if your more of a PvE person that loadout won't work too well. In some scenarios, yes, it will work, but for most PvE scenarios, it won't work, especially when doing King's Fall. Other than that, great loadout.
Dude, Thanks for your advices and tips but this thread was written a while ago. I putted my VoG Gear (Armor, Weapons, Class-Item, Shader, Sparrow, Ship) on and asked ppl what they think. I thought why not bring up some cool stuff in here :)