Git gud scrub and move on...
Your loadout is great for crucible since you use a shotgun and hand cannon. But, if your more of a PvE person that loadout won't work too well. In some scenarios, yes, it will work, but for most PvE scenarios, it won't work, especially when doing King's Fall. Other than that, great loadout.
I just did a few strikes in my last year 1 setup, weapons, armor, and Ghost. It was a blast. I haven't had that much fun since....well, year one.
Been playing VoG?
Love the gear