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originally posted in: Fallen Baby Chapter 68
Edited by Drokantoro: 6/10/2016 6:11:20 AM
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I really liked it, and I know this is your interpretation of these characters, but I (I mean I'm not the one writing this great story) don't think that Zavala and the Speaker would act like that, Shaxx I'm sure he would have a shit temper, but Zavala has been the leader of the Vanguard and Titan mentor for years, I'm sure he has a lot of patience and would be hard to break or make him angry, and as for the Speaker, well I just don't think that'll be his reaction, you need someone wise and in control for that role, but what do I know, this isn't my story. Other than that, it was a really food read.
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  • I just imagined in my head all these years since Osiris left the Speaker, it has become a sore spot for the man. I know the guy only wants to keep the City safe like Zavala, and he'd do anything within his power to lead the Guardians to help that cause. With my story, Vala takes that sore spot, pushing and pushing on topics that he had kept down and buried. That and the silence and scorn he receives from the Traveler about how to go on about a Hunter raising a Fallen has him frustrated. As for Zavala I believe it was over the top even for him. I can change it if you want because I can easily put another Titan in. I don't want to make anyone confused or mad about how I write c:

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  • No no no, don't change it, this is your story and your world, this is how you feel it should be and so be it. I was just stating my opinion, not for you to change your story, it was more like the way I feel this characters are, and you are showing us the way you feel they will behave in this situation. It's all good, don't you worry.

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