Amazing work! I enjoyed it more than destiny's actual story! If I did have some advice as a fellow writer of sorts, it would be this: Solas-3 was way too powerful. He went full Hindu god at the end with the arms! I loved the character, and the story as a whole, but no one likes a hero who can literally destroy anything. This is why we like Batman more than Superman. All in all, it is amazing. Even with that one thing, it was still incredibly entertaining, true to the source material, and frickin' awesome.