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originally posted in: Chapter 1 or whatever
1/20/2016 6:53:58 AM
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It'd be better if you cleaned it up little and added some spacing. You've got a bunch of stray/missing punctuation, extra spaces, broken sentences, etc. Having everything as 1 big wall of text makes it pretty difficult to read too. Interesting story idea though, I'd like to read more...
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