Thank you. Any negative feedback, in case I make another?

Well, first of, any feedback should be constructive, not negative. Second of all I hope you do write more :) Third, just remember to adjust sex of the second guardian. He is introduced as male, but referred to as 'she' a couple of times; in the end at part 1 and once in part 2. Form and consistency matters ;) Another more general piece of advice for writing fiction is that you remember your main characters inner life. How she senses and describes the Universe around her lets your readers know her. If she's closed off emotionally, find another way around this. What works really well for me in Taikonaut, is that the start pulls you in through inter-personal dialogue. This seems to be a strength of yours, so keep that in mind. The relationship, quippy and yet emotional, between Sasha and her ghost should also be a focal point going forward. Conversations in transit between the two of them would definately have me reading more :) Hope that helps a little, or at the very least, makes you think :)

The 'he' and 'she' mentality with the second guardian is supposed to indicate that 'The Guardian' is [i]your[/i] guardian. Remember in TTK's story, when you are referred to as 'The guardian', instead of 'he' or 'she'. [i]You[/i] are the second character. And thank you for the 'constructive' feedback. I appreciate it. I'll try to establish a better connection with Ghost and Sasha more.

Ok. Interesting approach, I missed that. Keep in mind, that my remarks are just advice - they are not indicative of what is missing or lacking in your story.

I know. Just wanted to tell ya~ :P Also, did you think the ending was a little weak?