I prefer this writing style over the old one. Seems like more of a story than a dialogue script.
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I think I prefer this one as well, I feel much more free to add more detail than in the other one, and still keep it amusing!
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Yea. Don't ever dumb it down like someone else in the comments suggested. This style is all inclusive for anyone who has interest in reading it. I prefer extra details to get me familiar with what the mood or situation is like.
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That I shan't my friend, I think I plan on sticking with this one. I'm also glad that you like this as well, it makes the ride all the more smoother for me.