Another awesome story!
Gotta say, I like the new writing style, but it might be a little better if they were talking more. I realize for this one the hunter is trying to be stealthy, but it seemed to me like this one had less speech than the previous ones. Other than that, I love it! Thank you so much for making these!
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Thank you, and I get what you're saying, I just wanted to get the beginning out of the way. But there will be much more dialogue between the team, now! Thanks for your input!
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Little to much description then I would like. But still great story
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Awesome! Thanks for responding